Friday, 5 January 2018

My voice over my short film

I have written my voice over for my short film. This will be throughout the film as I am having very little dialogue. I thought by having a voice over, it will make it more personal and different. I have written it in past and present tense as I want to show the journey that my character is going through, and to present that even though she has gone through all of this she still is completely cured and better and it is a long process.


Voice over for my short film starved

Fist two shots are in silence as she wakes up and turns off her alarm.

Shot 3- On some days I feel the warmth of the sunlight hitting my face and I feel uplifted and positively happy with myself. And then there are other days where I have no motivation, I lie there thinking about the day and the different challenges I’m going to have to face, there is no sunlight, no positivity, just darkness and the emptiness inside.

Shot 4- I stare into my reflection and there’s nothing, I don’t recognise myself anymore, but I don’t care. No one understands, I try to put a brave face on and pretend nothing is wrong, but there is no denning it, there is something wrong with me and I’m scared.

Shot 5- I see everything as a routine, wake up, get ready, skip breakfast and head straight for school.

Shot 6 and 7 silence, dialogue

Shot 8 no voice over

Shot 9&10- I don’t mind school, I guess it takes my mind off everything but each day I feel weaker and I’m worried that my friends and teachers will start to notice. My mum has and she gets upset every time I say I’m not hungry. The truth is, I am but after a while I get used to it I guess, but I can’t help it now, I’m in a cycle and I can’t get out.

Shot 11- Every day the only thing I look forward to is my dancing after school. It is where I can be myself, forget the day, the worries and pain.

Shot 12- However, the voices are still there, I try to ignore them but sometimes they are just too loud. Little things like seeing my refection in a mirror or a window makes me remember my deep secret and my insecurities.

Shot 13- I am never released from the fear or dread. Even having a snack in a dance class, I can’t and I’m embarrassed for being this way.

Shot 14- I want to be healthy and to be like all the other girls who don’t think anything of it. I know I’m not fuelling my body and that is why I feel so weak so often.

Shot 15- I remember a time, when I was at my very worse. I was in my ballet class and I hadn’t eaten all day other than a biscuit at lunch. I started feeling really weak and dizzy and before I knew it, everything felt muffled and blurry.

Shot 16- I woke up with everyone surrounding me and my head was pounding.

Shot 17- And it was then I knew I needed actual help.

Shot 18 black out

Shot 19- For the next couple of weeks I wasn’t allowed to go to school or dance. The doctors told me I needed to get better by resting and eating again. I would lie in my bed for hours thinking about how I could let myself get this bad. The truth is I didn’t release I was that ill, I knew that there was something wrong with me but I didn’t know I was starving myself and becoming anorexic.

Shot 20- It was then, when I was laying in my bed, I realised that I needed to actually do something to help me get better as this would be the only way I could break this vicious cycle and be able to dance again and do normal things that a teenage girl does. Not only did I starve myself from food but I starved myself from happiness which came from the feeling of freedom when I danced.
Finishes with a dance to a song called Helium which will also show flash backs of her past 

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