My Storyboard

I have created my storyboard for my short film. This short film is about a girl who suffers from anorexia and the ways she deals with all her pain is by dancing, as it is a real outlet to take her mind of it and to enlighten her mood by challenging her happiness.
I haven't yet come up with a tittle but I am brainstorming ideas at the moment. I like the title starved as it refers to how she is feeling but also she is starved from dancing which is only thing is enjoys.

Preliminary Exercise

I will be using this short film to do my preliminary film. I thought it was good as it looks at social media depression which is similar to my genre for my short film, looking at eating disorders. I will be using 1 minute of this clip to replicate the scene so I can practise different shots and mirror shots.
Here is my story board for my preliminary task.

Next I will be practising the split screen technique to show the phone screen on the shot. I want to learn how to do this, so that I can replicate this scene from the short film.